2007年9月25日 星期二
Different feeling
In this new semester we have two foreign teachers. They teach different course. One teaches English-writing who called Bill. The other teaches oral training who call Chad. After I attended their course, I thought that maybe a different kind of learning experience to me. I have to focus on my schoolwork and practice my English-speaking because I thought my English-speaking ability is not good enough to understand something that foreign teacher say.
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"In this new semester" ==> This semester".
"different course" ==> "different courses".
"One teaches English-writing who called Bill" ==> "Bill teaches English writing". I shouldn't have to correct the next sentence, should I? This sentence structure is flagrantly non-English.
"I thought that maybe a different kind of learning experience to me" I really don't understand what this sentence want to say. The grammar is very wrong. There are serious usage errors here. You have to rewrite this to clarify it.
"something that foreign teacher say" ==> "what my foreign teachers say".
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